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notes and goodbyes

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The notes been written
sealed with a kiss
a goodbye written in a day
Well what more was there to say ..

I'm sorry. No one could help me.
i gave in to the pain. i was sad, it was easy to see.


Different notes for different people.
All along similar lines
One for a friend, a counsellor a mother
One for a teacher, a doctor, a lover

i'm sorry i left you, after everything you did for me. please dont be sad.
suicide. happens all the time. I've gone to a happy place so it's not all that bad


Sweetly written sorrys and goodbyes
to explain i had to escape from depression
not that they would ever say i was depressed
they said i was a fighter, but asking me what i thought might have been best

i dont blame anyone. how could I.leaving you was the hardest part of letting go.
I'd given up on myself. but i carried on living for you. and that wasn't healthy, that you must know.


And I'm sorry i've made people sad.
And I'm sorry I've made people mad
But when your living in darkness you need a light
But somtimes you have to give up the fight
Please don't shed a tear for me.
Please. This was what i wanted, That i need you to see

Loves and kisses. never forget me
Sarah.

A friend
a case
a daughter
a student
a patient
a lover</i>
So .
don't freak out ok .
i'm safe for now.
jsut need to try and clear my head and this ws how i did it.

gives you all a taster of how your notes would sound :P
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Pyrox666xPheebs's avatar
I especially love the bold at the end.
Its like a song.
this is just..
it is amazing :)
It reminds me of a suicide note poem i started but didnt finish.
Maybe i will soon :) :hug: